Monday, 15 June 2015

Maths goal refelction

I have improved on my maths goal which is to learn  my groups of 2o and my quarter of a number.Because my teacher has tested me and my has friends have tested me.                                                                                                        

writing goal

I have improved on my writing goal. It is to edit my work more and make sure it makes sense. My mum has read my work and my teacher has read my work and they said that it has really improved.

Reading goal reflection

I have improved on my reading goal. It is to: monitor and adjust my reading for accuracy and sense when I get stuck.I have improved because when I am getting tested in my reading my teacher said I was amazing.

key compatancy reflections

I have not improved on my key competency goal to, keep my desk tidy. Because my desk is not tidy.

The Catch

I was sitting as still as a mushroom, then my rod shook. I was surprised (I didn't expect to catch anything) but when I pulled it out it was only a small fish. I was depressed as I walked over to my basket and dumped the fish in the basket, I was about to cry. Everybody else gets huge fish.

But then I heard a SNAP! I looked behind the bushes, it was my grandpa's old trap. I saw a fox stuck in it. I got my knife and cut the rope. The fox jumped on me, I felt like I was about to die...But then the fox smelt something and ran. He ran to my basket. The next thing I knew he fox was sitting there and stole my fish, I chased after the fox.

The fox ran into a dark spiky bush.  I was scared, I looked back at my village and remembered that they needed the fish so I followed it into the bush. When I reached the end of the bush, my pants got stuck. I tugged on them, then my pants got ripped. I chased the fox to a mountain and the fox rushed up the mountain. I ran after him and I was tired but I kept going.  I chased after the fox and saw him with the fish.

He chucked the fish. I heard a splash of water. Then I saw a huge lake full of fish and one huge fish.The fox gave me a stick that I turned into a rod and with some string from my pants and came back with heaps of fish. That's  my story.

Friday, 29 May 2015

clock tower writing

Once in a small little house lived a girl named Jane the house was wooden and old .She was a very poor family.Everyday they would try and lotto but they lever.one day they won lotto they were so happy they sold there house and moved to the big city. on the road she was so excited for the city she would wonder in the city what shops there would be.Years and Years she be living in the city but one day she saw a figure outside her house she was scared the man came... TO the door and said."I'm sorry but you are broke the girl ran to the and said."WWWWWWWWHHHHHHATTTTTTT!"I do not know how to get a way for money i'm sorry". said the banker."I can never tellthe time after the clock tower isn't working."I got I will work the tower we can make a cog dress and turn around."said the girl."That is a great idea!said the banker.The girl made cog dress and walked up the tower went on the plate,then started twirling. TO BE CONTINUED...

Sunday, 17 May 2015

science is all around us

microwave-electricity and radio waves make the molecules jump around to make heat.

light switch-electrical circuit makes light.

water tap-plumbing to bring water.

oven-electricity to heat.

fridge-electricty to cool down things.

solar heating-radiant energy from the sun to heat.

out door lights-absorbs energy from sun.

steam train-coal is burned to heat water to make steam to move the train.

electric train-electricity powers the train to move by connecting wires.

tv-electricity and radio waves to show a tv show.